新编《钟乳洞》求高手帮忙纠正错误！！

最近好像没有人在这里发贴啊（我不知道这么发附件，或者我没有权限发。所以只能将就这样发了。）

这是我的又一部作品，因为是自学的，编程只是略懂，没办法自己写完的剧情脚本，老是不成功，一进游戏就直接死了，上个新编《炽雪城》也没有人帮我纠正，哎，大家都忙了！
谁能帮我，请加我QQ 914934959 。我把文件发给你看一下！！ （注：下面是剧情，没有npc 文件。）


// 锺乳洞
int Rule = 3;
int RoundTime = 15;
int PlayerSpawn = 9;
int PlayerSpawnDir = 90;
int PlayerWeapon = 5;
int PlayerWeapon2 = 1;
int PlayerHP = 2500;

int trg0 = 0;
int trg1 = 0;
int trg2 = 0;
int trg3 = 0;
int trg4 = 0;
int survivor = -1;
int gameover = 0;
int timer0 = 0;

OnStart()
{
AddNPC("101");
AddNPC("102");
AddNPC("103");
AddNPC("104");
}
OnUpdate()
{
int player = GetAnyChar("player");
if (player < 0)
{
return 0;
}
if (gameover == 2)
{
return 0;
}

int c;
int c2;
int c3;
int p1;
int now = GetGameTime();

if (trg0 == 0)
{
c = GetChar("慕容云川");
c2 = GetChar("哨兵﹒甲");
c3 = GetChar("哨兵﹒乙");
p1 = GetChar("慕容雪");

if (c>=0 && c2>=0 && c3>=0 && p1>=0)
{
Perform(c, "say", "你们给我小心巡逻！发现发现那小子给我宰了他！");
Perform(c, "say", "要是看见我妹妹立刻把她带回来！！！");
Perform(c, "faceto", c2);

ChangeBehavior(c2, "patrol", 18, 39, 41, 54);
Perform(c2, "say", "是！");
Perform(c2,"faceto", c);

ChangeBehavior(c3, "patrol", 47, 50, 39);
Perform(c3,"say", "..yes sir..");
Perform(c3,"faceto", c);

ChangeBehavior(p1, "patrol", 27, 26);
Perform(p1,"say", "（星！！你现在怎么样了？............！）");

trg0 = 1;
}
}
if (trg0 == 1)
{
p1 = GetChar("慕容雪");
SetTarget(0, "char", p1);
SetTarget(1, "char", player);
if (p1>=0 && Distance(0, 1) < 100)
{
ChangeBehavior(p1, "follow", player);
Perform(p1,"say","我哥哥派人到处找我，非要让我嫁给南宫俊，我........！！");
Perform(p1, "pause", 2);
Perform(p1,"say","孟星魂！！是你吗！！告诉我不是在做梦吧！");

PlayerPerform("say","嘘！嘘！不要说话！你先跟我走。");
PlayerPerform("say","雪儿！你..！你在这儿做什么？！");
PlayerPerform("pause", 2);

trg0 = 2;
}
}
if (trg0 == 2)
{
c2 = GetChar("哨兵﹒甲");
c3 = GetChar("哨兵﹒乙");
if (c2>=0 && GetEnemy(c2)==player)
{
ChangeBehavior(c3, "follow", c2);
Perform(c2,"say","啊，是你小子，唉快过来！帮忙！");
Perform(c2,"faceto", player);
trg0 = 3;
}
if (c3>=0 && GetEnemy(c3)==player)
{
ChangeBehavior(c2, "follow", c3);
Perform(c3,"say","唉，你是谁，唉快过来呀！那小子来了！");
Perform(c3,"faceto", player);
trg0 = 3;
}
}
if (trg0 == 3)
{
c2 = GetChar("哨兵﹒甲");
c3 = GetChar("哨兵﹒乙");
survivor = -1;
if (c2>=0 && GetHP(c2)<=0)
{
survivor = c3;
}
if (c3>=0 && GetHP(c3)<=0)
{
survivor = c2;
}
if (Get(survivor) > 0)
{
c = GetChar("慕容云川");
if (c >= 0)
{
ChangeBehavior(survivor, "follow", c);
Perform(survivor, "say", "小子！你给我等着！");
Perform(survivor, "faceto", player);
trg0 = 4;
}
}
}
if (trg0 == 4)
{
c = GetChar("慕容云川");
if (c>=0 && GetHP(survivor)>0)
{
SetTarget(0, "char", c);
SetTarget(1, "char", survivor);
if (Distance(0, 1) < 150)
{
Perform(survivor, "say", "报告老大！发现那位闯关的小子了！");
Perform(survivor, "faceto", c);

ChangeBehavior(c, "follow", player);
Perform(c, "say", "走！跟我去会会他！");
Perform(c, "pause", 2);
Perform(c, "faceto", survivor);

trg0 = 5;
}
}
}
if (trg1 == 0)
{
c = GetChar("慕容云川");
if (c>=0 && GetEnemy(c)==player)
{
Perform(c, "say", "你这臭小子，我等你狠久了！！");
Perform(c, "say", "废话少说，看招！！");
Perform(c, "faceto", player);
if (trg0 != 5)
{
ChangeBehavior(c, "kill", player);
Perform(c,"say","哼，要不是因为你，我妹妹早嫁给南宫家了！");
Perform(c,"pause", 2);
Perform(c,"say","臭小子，你终于来了！！雪儿，你们......");
Perform(c,"faceto", player);

PlayerPerform("say","你这个不知廉耻家伙，就为了钱财出卖妹妹！！");
PlayerPerform("pause", 6);

trg0 = 5;
}
trg1 = 1;
}
}
if (trg2 == 0 && now > timer0)
{
c = GetChar("慕容云川");
if (GetHP(c) <= 0)
{
Say(c,".小子伸手不错.可惜我不是你的对手!你要好好对待我妹妹..！！");
PlayerPerform("use", 15);
Perform(p1,"use", 15);
timer0 = now + 5;
trg2 = 1;
}
}
if (trg2 == 1 && now > timer0)
{
AddNPC("105");
RemoveNPC(c);
trg2 = 2;
}
if (trg2 == 2)
{
int c = GetChar("南宫俊");
SetTarget(0, "char", c);
SetTarget(1, "char", player);
if(c >= 0 && GetEnemy(c)==player && Distance(0, 1) < 300)
{
ChangeBehavior(c, "kill", player);
Perform(c,"say", "哼！来呀！要是你输了，以后就不要让我再见到你....");
Perform(c, "pause", 2);
Perform(c,"say", "你小子给我闭嘴！都是以为你！要不是你阿雪久不会离开我..！！");
Perform(c, "pause", 5);
Perform(c,"say", "别以为我不知道你们的事，哼！我已经忍了很久了！");
Perform(c, "pause", 5);
Perform(c,"say", "你们可让我逮住了，雪，枉我对你一往情深！");
Perform(c,"faceto", player);

ChangeBehavior(p1, "attacktarget", 1);
Perform(p1,"say","南宫俊，你不要敬酒不吃吃罚酒！");
Perform(p1, "pause", 2);
Perform(p1,"say","你少来啦，我喜欢谁那是我的事，希望你冷静点！");
Perform(p1, "pause", 3);

PlayerPerform("block", 0);
PlayerPerform("say", "好，要是你输了，今后要好好对待啊雪，否则下次见到你绝不轻饶！！");
PlayerPerform("pause", 5);
PlayerPerform("say", ".（呵呵，没想到啊雪再他心里这么重要，可我并没有争夺的意思啊）....?");
PlayerPerform("pause", 7);
PlayerPerform("say", "你这是什么意思?......请不要误会..！！");
PlayerPerform("pause", 5);
PlayerPerform("block", 1);

trg2 = 3;
}
}
if (gameover!=-1 && GetHP(player)<=0)
{
gameover = -1;
timer0 = now + 5;
}
if ((gameover==1 || gameover==-1) && now>timer1)
{
GameOver(gameover);
gameover = 2;
}
}

你去流星译站，那里也许有人帮你解答，我现在没有时间。

1.在trg2==2下有个int宣告.
这里多余,宣告应该在上面.
2.最后gameover里有一个now>timer1
你未宣告timer1,只宣告了timer0
这两个改完了就可以游戏了.
还有一个错别字:你伸手不错
另外的建议,例如在trg2==0下你只说了c叫云川,但是命令里出现了人物p1.虽然p1会引用最近的一次赋值,但是在多条件触发的剧情里,很难做到哪一节按照什么顺序.比如你这个就是3线的剧情.可能会引发人物动作错误.不过你要是人物少,每个人物对应一个c,也可以.但是这样又占据了运算空间.
考虑到你有一个trg0=5的剧情连接,我认为你一定是还有下文.不然还要再调试,因为测试了一下,南宫死后游戏不结束.

回复 3楼束缚·舞的帖子

嗯 ，你都看了。我现在在游戏是以什么情况结束上还没有研究，另外对于剧情我都是临时编造的，按照我的简单逻辑编写的，然后反复测试，一旦出错就返回文件开始检查错并修改，对于顺序上的错乱应该可以控制，但是比较繁琐复杂，尤其是trg2 = 1；后面还有几个trg？ = ？比如原飞鹏堡的剧情，我研究了很久不知道是什么用意。

回复 4楼kakui008的帖子

这我可以帮你，我发个简单的教程给你，这教程是我写的，你在网上是找不到的。但你要帮我个忙，若你同意，给我邮箱，我寄说明

回复 5楼adsl12203的帖子

呵呵 你还有忙要我帮啊，什么忙？先说说，我看能帮上不！！QQ ：9***@qq.com